tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6249325962424901468.post6059778371137070461..comments2023-06-23T11:28:08.784+01:00Comments on The Tardis Scribbles: Flash Fiction Friday - The Masterpiece #FFFCherie Nichollshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10877225088700249643noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6249325962424901468.post-69901124672972615942014-12-17T22:15:05.434+00:002014-12-17T22:15:05.434+00:00Fantastic flash, Doris! So is she a spirit bent on...Fantastic flash, Doris! So is she a spirit bent on revenge now? Again, this could definitely be expanded upon. Who was she and why was she sacrificed? How does she exact her revenge. Details...Dariel Rayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636771393462118904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6249325962424901468.post-35257941463515493872014-12-16T05:26:10.936+00:002014-12-16T05:26:10.936+00:00Wow! Shivers with delight. Loved this flash, and t...Wow! Shivers with delight. Loved this flash, and the scary detail of her pending death, and yet her plan on revenge. Awesome flash!Rolling Muse in The Roseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11584542480191015817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6249325962424901468.post-69251905395626274932014-12-15T04:48:28.371+00:002014-12-15T04:48:28.371+00:00Creepy, in a tragic, wonderful way. Reminds me of ...Creepy, in a tragic, wonderful way. Reminds me of the feel of a short I'm writing at the moment. Love it!Phoenix Johnson USAT Bestsellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08809241705824333367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6249325962424901468.post-64540715150806806902014-12-13T13:09:53.341+00:002014-12-13T13:09:53.341+00:00Wonderful flasher, depicting something tragic. You...Wonderful flasher, depicting something tragic. You wrote it so well. It sends chills down meNaomi Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16693171140434692340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6249325962424901468.post-59645868437002471762014-12-12T23:26:07.463+00:002014-12-12T23:26:07.463+00:00I prefer a happier interpretation of the picture:
...I prefer a happier interpretation of the picture:<br />Sarah was lonely and confused since her boyfriend had disappeared. She walked through the woods seeking solace from her pain. She and Aris loved walking under the canopy of towering trees in the area. Aris told her that he felt peace in the shadow of the trees.<br /><br />Aris watched Sarah from Olympus fuming at being forbidden to go to her. Desperate he asked Aiolos to use his power over the winds to bring Sarah to Olympus so they could be reunited. The winds lifted Sarah but she was unafraid then she was in the arms of Aris again. He vowed they'd always be together whatever the cost.<br /><br />Well I almost made the 100 words. I tightened my story as much as I could. The original was much better but then I was 25 words over. Guess I'm not much of a writer and using just 100 words is harder then it seems. Oh well I gave it a shot. =)<br /><br /> Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17236210103153998678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6249325962424901468.post-87712916196426886332014-12-12T23:03:35.357+00:002014-12-12T23:03:35.357+00:00Shiver... What an intense flash. Whose sacrifice? ...Shiver... What an intense flash. Whose sacrifice? Why? When? So many questions unanswered.Angelica Dawsonhttp://angelicadawson.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6249325962424901468.post-70278208755795118552014-12-12T21:41:37.182+00:002014-12-12T21:41:37.182+00:00Wow, that's sounds like a chilling and interes...Wow, that's sounds like a chilling and interesting piece you put out there Doris. Great work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6249325962424901468.post-70157035238676193662014-12-12T16:59:53.493+00:002014-12-12T16:59:53.493+00:00Thanks, Muffy. You're always so encouraging &l...Thanks, Muffy. You're always so encouraging <3Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6249325962424901468.post-24981738057454216002014-12-12T12:54:35.997+00:002014-12-12T12:54:35.997+00:00I always look forward to your perspectives and thi...I always look forward to your perspectives and this is no different. Lovely perspective. Very clever and revenge will be sweet. Loved it! xoMuffy Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00659495646622567840noreply@blogger.com