Friday, 2 August 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - New Beginning #FFF

It's an extra special Friday today, because it is Release day for me, and my release day squee will follow, but I couldn't pass up on this picture.

"No, please, don't make me."
Her fingers dug into her skin, leaving white indents behind, and she screwed her eyes shut. Whatever had possessed her to think that she could do this? She couldn't bear to see the disgust in his eyes.
"I'm not the girl you knew."
She sensed him step closer, and she swallowed hard to stop the ball of misery in her gut to escape out of her tightly compressed lips.
"No, you're not."
An ice cold fist squeezed her heart at his words, even as his hot breath whispered across her back.

"You're the woman I love."


Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)
Till next week, folks.

D x


  1. How romantic and beautifully written. I'd love to know more of their relationship. Great flash

  2. Beautifully written dialogue and romantic feelings expressed very well. What kind of woman is she hiding.I could feel his breath touching her skin.

  3. Nice flash, Doris. I wonder what it was that he wanted her to do.

  4. I was worried at first but this was a lovely flash, especially the last line, aw.

  5. Loved this flash. :) So sweet, and full of emotion. Her dislike for herself, yet how he saw her beauty. I want to know more. What was/is about to happen? Def caught my attention.