Friday, 27 June 2014

Flash Fiction Friday - Fate #FFF

Happy Friday, folks. Enjoy today's flash.

Suzie held her breath, as she watched him shuffle the cards that would declare her fate. Unlike any fortune teller she’d ever been to, this one exuded an air of almost palpable mystique that had drawn her despite the obvious showmanship.
She almost didn’t hear him over the pounding of her blood in her ears. After so many years of fruitless searching would she finally get the answer she sought?
The cards fell to the floor and the room spun. The rush of air knocked her off her feet and from far away she heard the magic words.

“I’m here.”


Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)
Till next week, folks.
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  1. Wow, an interesting take. Who is here, I wonder? Great flash.

    1. Thanks, Angelica, and I have no idea, lol.

  2. Amazing it captured me immediately

  3. Wow! Great flash, this gave me chills. I def want to know more.

  4. Mystery and intrigue, I like it.