Friday, 13 September 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - Payback #FFF

Hurray it's Friday, and here's your flash. Enjoy :-)

"Is that all you've got?"
His voice dripped over her full of bored disdain, and Angelique froze.
"You'll have to try harder than that."
She spun round, and it took all of her willpower to not wipe that smirk off his face. That piece of shit had made her sister's life a misery for the last six months. Her identical twin had quit this morning, rather than subject herself to this indignity.
Time to show this pathetic little human that he'd picked on the wrong woman. No one did that to her sister.

She smiled and let her beast show.


Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)
Till next week, folks.

D x 


  1. Replies
    1. Thanks, Gemma. I had fun with this one :-)

  2. I love that woman. She'll show him. Great flash

  3. Fabulous, I hope she bares her teeth and sinks them into his flesh.

    1. Hehe, I get the feeling that's exactly what she'll do :-)

  4. Whoa, what a flash with attitude! Taking his distain and boredom to another whole level.......but someone isn't coming back! You certainly jiuced this photo up, Doris! Fantastic!:) xo

  5. Damn! He is in for an ass chewing he won't soon forget! Great flash, Doris!

  6. Oh ... a FemDom shifter? Niiice!!!!!!!

  7. Well, they do say payback is a b!#ch. LOL

  8. I like the spin on this. great job

  9. More please I want to know how she repaid him for his treatment of her sister. Great flash

  10. Oh my... I wonder how he will react when he finds out its the twin and not the one he expected. ;-) I def want to find out what happens next. Great flash!