Tuesday, 10 September 2013

#TantalizingTuesdays - The Dress

Happy Tuesday, folks. Time to tease you again.




He tightened the last knot and stepped back to admire his handiwork. The natural rope complimented her skin color just like he'd known it would.  Head bent, her long tresses hid her expression, but the soft puffs of air accentuating the rise and fall of her breasts, and the goose flesh covering her skin, told him all he needed to know.
"Beautiful, little one."
A shudder went through her bound body, and he dropped a kiss on the top of her head, and then helped her up.
Tied into the rope dress, she could only take small steps and he tempered his stride to hers, until they stood in front of the mirror.
"Look and see."
At his request she raised her head and her expressive eyes widened. His gut clenched seeing the shimmer of tears in her eyes.
"It's beautiful, Sir. Is that how you see me?"
"You know I do, little one. And I want everyone to see you like this, to know you're mine."
Their gazes locked in the mirror when he traced the knots covering the scars she hated. The scars no one could see now.

He almost missed her whispered, "Green, Sir."



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As ever, let me know what you thought of my teaser today.

D xx

26 comments:

  1. Awesome. I love the emotion from both parties you create with the dialogue. Her sensitivity about her scars and his adoration for her.

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  2. Love it! Totally agree with Michelle. I love the way you inject emotion into your stories.

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  3. All of the above! In a word Lovely!

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  4. I enjoyed the build up, which you orchestrated masterfully. His tenderness and her vulnerability in the shared moment of love, accepatance and protection is viseral. I loved this teaser and can see this going further. But, unfamiliar with the BDSM nuance, I don't understand the last line, "Green, sir" but I am sure that's just me. Otherwise, this was very sensual:) xo

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    1. Green represents the traffic lights system of safewords, Muffy. She's letting him know she's happy :-)

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  5. I love the emotion in this. You captured the moment perfectly

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  6. Definitely a different perspective between these two lovers, especially the rope dress, the symbolic bond of their relationship, which I find exciting and appealing.

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  7. Beautifully written piece showing real feelings between the two characters.

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  8. Such a detailed description the Doris, absolutely lovely. x

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  9. Tender, sensual and beautiful. I really enjoyed this.

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  10. Tender, sensual and beautiful. I really enjoyed this.

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