He tightened the last knot and stepped back to
admire his handiwork. The natural rope complimented her skin color just like
he'd known it would. Head bent, her long
tresses hid her expression, but the soft puffs of air accentuating the rise and
fall of her breasts, and the goose flesh covering her skin, told him all he
needed to know.
"Beautiful, little one."
A shudder went through her bound body, and he
dropped a kiss on the top of her head, and then helped her up.
Tied into the rope dress, she could only take small
steps and he tempered his stride to hers, until they stood in front of the
mirror.
"Look and see."
At his request she raised her head and her
expressive eyes widened. His gut clenched seeing the shimmer of tears in her
eyes.
"It's beautiful, Sir. Is that how you see
me?"
"You know I do, little one. And I want everyone
to see you like this, to know you're mine."
Their gazes locked in the mirror when he traced the
knots covering the scars she hated. The scars no one could see now.
He almost missed her whispered, "Green,
Sir."
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Awesome. I love the emotion from both parties you create with the dialogue. Her sensitivity about her scars and his adoration for her.
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DeleteLove it! Totally agree with Michelle. I love the way you inject emotion into your stories.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kiru :-D
DeleteAwww beautiful
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DeleteAll of the above! In a word Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Michaela :-)
DeleteI enjoyed the build up, which you orchestrated masterfully. His tenderness and her vulnerability in the shared moment of love, accepatance and protection is viseral. I loved this teaser and can see this going further. But, unfamiliar with the BDSM nuance, I don't understand the last line, "Green, sir" but I am sure that's just me. Otherwise, this was very sensual:) xo
ReplyDeleteGreen represents the traffic lights system of safewords, Muffy. She's letting him know she's happy :-)
DeleteI love the emotion in this. You captured the moment perfectly
ReplyDeleteThanks, Naomi :-)
DeleteSo beautiful and emotional!
ReplyDeleteThank you :-)
DeleteDefinitely a different perspective between these two lovers, especially the rope dress, the symbolic bond of their relationship, which I find exciting and appealing.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Pablo :-)
DeleteGreat piece; filled with emotion and build-up.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ray :-)
DeleteBeautifully written piece showing real feelings between the two characters.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Julez :-)
DeleteSO, so beautiful.
ReplyDelete*big grin*
DeleteSuch a detailed description the Doris, absolutely lovely. x
ReplyDeleteThanks, J.P. :-D
DeleteTender, sensual and beautiful. I really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteTender, sensual and beautiful. I really enjoyed this.
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