Tuesday, 18 March 2014

#TantalizingTuesdays - The Debt

Hello, lovely peeps. Have you missed my Tuesday tease?


Thanks to the last two Tuesdays being release days, I haven't teased you in a while, but I'm back. What's more today's flash has inspired a brand new story, I'm just going to have to write. Gotta love my muse. Flashes get her every time.

So, Enjoy ....

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Her heart tried to beat itself out her chest, and he hadn't even touched her yet. He simply stood there, hand held out, waiting for her to take it.
If she did, she'd be his for the remainder of the weekend. His to do with as he pleased, as per the terms of the agreement she'd signed to pay off her father's debt.
"If you're having second thoughts, then now is the time to voice them, pet."
The deep sensual tones of his voice wrapped her in the warm embrace of his concern, and she pulled a shuddering breath into her lungs. That he cared enough to put her at ease meant the world to her right now.
 "No second thoughts, Sir."
She took a step closer to him and placed her hand in his. Shivers raced over her skin as he tightened his fingers around hers, and then lifted her hand to his lips.
The feel of his lips on the back of her hand startled her into looking up at him.
"That's it. Relax," he murmured, and the heated promise in his amber gaze soothed the knot of worry in her gut.

"You're finally mine, my sweet girl."

Tantalizing Tuesday Authors use a photo prompt to tease in 200 words. Please click on the graphic to check out the other fabulous participating authors.

As ever, let me know what you thought of my teaser today. 

D xx 


  1. Great to have you back, Doris. This is a perfect combination of wicked and gently sensual. The premise is deliciously evil, of course, but you leave the reader in no doubt that everyone involved will be left happy with the way things work out. Nicely done (as always!).

  2. I can see why this would inspire a story, and one I have to read. In very few words you built up the dramatic tension, desire and apprehension between the two. I love your teaser

  3. This drew me immediately ....I love the movement of this ....I want more ...smiles ...well done

  4. This was great Doris. I love the hesitancy and the desire not to hesitate. I enjoy how you developed these characters from the first arrival to collect the debt to this tease here. Great story.

  5. Fabulous tease....can't wait to read the whole story... ;)

  6. This was sweet and tender. Looking forward to the rest.

  7. Wonderful tease with great description! Bravo!

  8. Sounds like my to-buy list is going to blow up, thanks to you. *grins with wicked delight*

  9. I love this! It's extremely sexy. Nice <3

  10. OH yes, nice tease and gray story more please :)