*grins*
Thanks to the last two Tuesdays being release days, I haven't teased you in a while, but I'm back. What's more today's flash has inspired a brand new story, I'm just going to have to write. Gotta love my muse. Flashes get her every time.
So, Enjoy ....
(Source: Pinterest
http://www.pinterest.com/pin/279926933059439874/)
Her heart tried to beat itself out her chest, and he
hadn't even touched her yet. He simply stood there, hand held out, waiting for
her to take it.
If she did, she'd be his for the remainder of the
weekend. His to do with as he pleased, as per the terms of the agreement she'd
signed to pay off her father's debt.
"If you're having second thoughts, then now is
the time to voice them, pet."
The deep sensual tones of his voice wrapped her in
the warm embrace of his concern, and she pulled a shuddering breath into her
lungs. That he cared enough to put her at ease meant the world to her right
now.
"No
second thoughts, Sir."
She took a step closer to him and placed her hand in
his. Shivers raced over her skin as he tightened his fingers around hers, and
then lifted her hand to his lips.
The feel of his lips on the back of her hand
startled her into looking up at him.
"That's it. Relax," he murmured, and the heated
promise in his amber gaze soothed the knot of worry in her gut.
"You're finally mine, my sweet girl."
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As ever, let me know what you thought of my teaser today.
D xx
Great to have you back, Doris. This is a perfect combination of wicked and gently sensual. The premise is deliciously evil, of course, but you leave the reader in no doubt that everyone involved will be left happy with the way things work out. Nicely done (as always!).
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jake :-)
DeleteI can see why this would inspire a story, and one I have to read. In very few words you built up the dramatic tension, desire and apprehension between the two. I love your teaser
ReplyDeleteThanks, Naomi :-)
Deleteexcellent! rock on Doris!
ReplyDelete*big grin*
DeleteThis drew me immediately ....I love the movement of this ....I want more ...smiles ...well done
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mangus :-)
DeleteThis was great Doris. I love the hesitancy and the desire not to hesitate. I enjoy how you developed these characters from the first arrival to collect the debt to this tease here. Great story.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Molly :-)
DeleteFabulous tease....can't wait to read the whole story... ;)
ReplyDelete*takes a bow* ;-)
DeleteThis was sweet and tender. Looking forward to the rest.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kiru :-)
DeleteWonderful tease with great description! Bravo!
ReplyDeleteThanks :-D
DeleteSounds like my to-buy list is going to blow up, thanks to you. *grins with wicked delight*
ReplyDelete*blows kiss to Cheryl*
DeleteI love this! It's extremely sexy. Nice <3
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kenna :-D
DeleteOH yes, nice tease and gray story more please :)
ReplyDelete*big grin*
DeleteSexy, sexy! Such promise :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Dariel :-)
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