Friday, 4 October 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - The Bench #FFF

The happiest of Fridays to you! It's Release day for me today, so I'm a tad excited, but I couldn't miss out on a chance to flash you ;-)

Enjoy The Bench

Rosie swallowed down the bile clogging her throat. How dare they? In broad day light and on their bench. Max had never been keen on public displays of affection, but this had been their spot. The place where he had proposed, the place they had been so happy before.
Always before, before the accident, and the damn brunette who had taken Rosie's place. Before, how Rosie hated that word, but she was ready now. She'd practiced, and she would show him.

She raised her hand and concentrated. Slowly it formed and the rest of her body materialized. Vengeance was hers.


Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)

Till next week, folks.


  1. Oh, Doris! Raised her hand with WHAT??!! Fabulous cliffhanger! :) xo

  2. What would be her vengeance? How dare Max ,leave her. I'd like to know what the accident was. I hope Rosie has her way.

    1. Oh she will, I reckon. Thanks, Pablo :-)

  3. You gave me chills and just enough to form a story in my head. Fabulous.

  4. You always surprise me. I wonder what she'll do

  5. DAMN Now I have to know even more. What did she do to get her vengeance. Brilliant flash

  6. Such a super flash Doris. SO much emotion. xx

  7. Shivers. I loved the twist in this story. Have me looking over my shoulder now. I wonder what she'll do next? Awesome flash!