One of the best things about being a crit partner is the privilege of being right there at the conception of a great story. I recall getting the whip out and 'forcing' Jorja to share the start of this story, when she first came up with the idea. She refused at first, but we wore her down, and then adopted our best bullying...I mean encouraging tactics to keep her writing.
I fell in love with Victor when I was red penning Jorja's manuscript, and I'm sure the readers will too. So without further ado, take it away, Jorja :-)
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Thanks for pimping me today Doris J
I have you to thank for putting the
idea for Jackie and Her Loose Talk in my head after I read your fabulous
Naughty Fairy Tale, ‘Last of His Kind’, and my mind drifted off to Fairyland
lol.
The idea at the
start seemed so outrageous to me to have this glamorous kiss-and-tell queen
chasing down a reclusive billionaire and still keep a connection to the
original story but, as ever, you got the whip out and made sure I finished it!
I’ve posted a
taster that I hope everyone will enjoy. I sure as hell had fun writing it.
Blurb
Jackie Thompson is the kiss and tell queen, prepared to sleep her
way to fame and fortune. Her latest escapade with two footballers is on course
to secure her future but she trades it for a handful of magic beans…or in this
case, the address of a reclusive billionaire.
Scarred by his past, Viktor Torok hides away from the outside world.
When Jackie barges into his life he lets her get away in an effort to protect
his privacy. But he hasn’t counted on the unwanted attraction that rages
between them on their second meet.
Can she break through his walls and help them heal each other?
Excerpt
A gentle tug on his wrist woke
Viktor from a heavy slumber. Through sleepy eyes he could make out Jackie’s
blurry form at the top of the bed. “What are you doing?”
“I thought you’d never wake up.”
Another tug on his other wrist and he tried to sit up to see for himself. With
both arms above his head, he couldn’t move.
“What the fuck?” He tried again
but found both wrists tied to the brass headboard with two of his silk ties.
Jackie straddled his waist,
teasing his barely awake cock with her smooth pussy. “We’re going to work on a
little trust exercise.”
“This doesn’t tally with the
‘fall back and I’ll catch you’ scenario we were taught on the training courses.
I think I’d remember the ‘tie you naked to the bed and give you a boner’
version.” She leaned forward to test the knots, her breasts rubbing him into
semi-arousal.
“Much more effective I find.” A
little wiggle of her hips coaxed him into a full hard-on and she couldn’t hide
the smile in her eyes. “Now, why are you so reluctant for me to go down on
you?”
He admired her direct approach;
it didn’t leave room for lies. “It’s a delicate piece of my anatomy which I am
reluctant to put anywhere it could get bitten off.”
Jackie eyed his swollen manhood.
“It doesn’t look very delicate to me. In fact, not too long ago I think it
tried to nail me to a tree trunk. So, have you always had this phobia of
blowjobs?”
“You should have been a therapist
you know. Although I think you need the glasses and hair in a bun to pull it
off effectively.”
She slapped his thigh but rather
than chastising him, the sharp sting excited him further. “I’m serious.”
“Since Carmen, I don’t trust
anyone not to hurt me, physically or otherwise.” The truth finally emerged as
Viktor came to terms with his fucked up view of the world and everyone in it.
To his relief, Jackie kept her
business-like manner rather than pity him. “A wise man once told me to lie back
and enjoy. So—” A wave of her hand shooed him back onto the pillow.
“Is this you acting out some sort
of Domme fantasy?” Smart-mouthing her was the only stalling technique in his
armory right now as panic set in. Am I
ready to give myself over so completely to another woman?
“Now you come to mention it…” She
took his cock in hand and rubbed the crown against her slit.
“Shouldn’t we have a safe word or
something so you stop when I say?” Cold sweat broke out on his forehead at
being totally at her mercy.
She let go so his cock slapped
back on his belly. “You’re right. Hmm, what about Beanstalk?”
“Beanstalk?” He wasn’t sure
whether to be offended or not. What size
of Beanstalk?
“Yeah. Because it leads to such
wonderful treasures.” Not giving him time to preen, Jackie bowed her head and
took his cock deep into her mouth.
He fought his bindings, and
curled his toes; desperate to take charge of his own body but Jackie’s mouth
was definitely calling the shots. The swirl of her tongue around his shaft and
the soft lips circling his girth threw his idea of careful control into
turmoil. While he tried to form a coherent plan to dominate the situation, the
blinding white light of impending orgasm obliterated all thoughts except the
party going on between his legs.
Just
as Viktor started to go with the flow, Jackie drew back from the base of his
shaft and slowly slid him free of her tight hold. “Here ends lesson one.”
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Love Jackie!!! and I guess i can tollorate Jorja as long as she keeps the sheep on her side of the water!!!
ReplyDeleteJprja don't ever try to tell me you're sweet and innocent! not any more you're not.
ReplyDeleteWhere would we be without D the D? Lol
ReplyDeleteCherie, you know you love me...and the sheep!
And J Lilley, you have all definitely corrupted me :D