Cue, me having an, 'Oh lordy, I need to write a teaser for tomorrow,' moment.
*rolls eyes at self*
In my defense I am knee deep in a new wip...
Anyhoo, enough of my rambling - Enjoy!
(Source: Pinterest http://pinterest.com/pin/177610779025971512/)
She
had finally stopped crying. The wrenching sobs that had shaken her body had
subsided and he had managed to coax her out of the bath. With her body rinsed
free of the mud and dirt it was just her hair that needed cleaning.
He
massaged her silken tresses as gently as he could, forcing his breathing to
stay even, to not give away his own anxiety. She had been so upset, so
devastated that he hadn’t managed to bring himself to ask her the one question
that was burning on his soul.
Judging
by the knickers she still wore, perhaps she had managed to get away before
anything worse could have happened. Surely she would not lean back into his
hands if the bastards had done more than scare her silly.
His
own beast roared and clawed to be set free, to seek revenge for the trespass on
his territory, his woman. She was his, had been from the moment he’d spotted
her across the crowded common room.
His
jaws ached with the need to brand, to claim what was his but that was not what
she needed right now. He would stay her friend if it killed him.
Let me know what you thought of my teaser today.
Till next week, folks.
D x
What an emotional teaser.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Angelica :-)
DeleteReally really liked this one D!
ReplyDelete*big grin*
Deleteoh my...
ReplyDeleteHeh heh :-)
DeleteEmotive piece, so many questions l wouldn't want to ask! Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Gemma :-)
DeleteI look forward to reading the book that this goes with.
ReplyDeleteThis is just a flash for now :-)
DeleteGreat teaser!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Angie :-)
DeleteYou nearly brought me to tears, woman! I love it.
ReplyDeleteSorry, Kiru, and thanks :-)
DeleteLove, love, love this, and so agreeing with Kiru! What a touching piece. As Gemma said, I have many questions. I hope you will write more of this story.
ReplyDeleteThank you, and we'll see. My current wip started off as a tease, so who knows :-)
DeleteYou set up an incredibly emotional story. I want to know more.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Paloma :-)
DeleteSo much going on in this teaser - raw hurt, tenderness, passion, rage and love. Not bad for 200 words... ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jake :-D
Deleteexcellently written tease, very powerful and i agree with Jake, it's surprising what you can come up with when you've only got 200 words to work with. well done.
ReplyDeleteThe torture they both must have felt. I was glad that she trusted him and he restrained his primal needs to be her friend, for at least that moment. Wonderful work, fast paced and meaningful.
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