Friday, 3 January 2014

Flash Fiction Friday - The Offering #FFF

Happy Friday, folks. Here's your flash for today - The Offering....



Like an offering of old she lay on the table waiting for him, and despite the trap he knew this had to be, his cock hardened in his pants, and his incisors grew.
Her delicious scent increased as her heart beat faster, pushing the blood through her veins—blood that called him like no other.
Who had placed her here?  Vamp bait for anyone who passed by? Anger replaced his arousal and in a blur of movement he scooped her up and ran, as all hell broke loose behind them.
Her gasp of surprise carried just two words.

"Thank you."                  

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Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)
Till next week, folks.


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17 comments:

  1. You must write more of this. Sounds like a great opening to a story. Fab.

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    1. Yeah, maybe... lol There's certainly a story there.

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  2. Yep, definitely want to know what happens next!

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  3. Great, flash with a tinge of darkness I love it

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  4. You captured so many different emotions and showed so many different angles. Fabulous.

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  5. Trust you to pull a surprise like this. Love it. :)

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  6. This was such a tension filled piece and the twist at the last line totally unexpected, Doris. Fabulous piece. I love the way your mind works and keeps your readers unnerved up to the very end :) xo

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  7. vampires, yes. Who doesn't love fangs. great flash

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    1. Indeedy, gotta love a good vamp, eh ;-)

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  8. Intriguing and sexy flash. :)

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