Friday, 17 January 2014

Flash Friday Fiction - The Wish #FFF

Happy Friday, folks. Enjoy today's flash :-)



"Make a wish."
Sandra rolled her eyes at the dramatic tone of voice and earned herself a swift kick under the table from Mimi. Seriously, though, she wasn’t taken in by his charlatan, no, not her.
The ridiculous old fashioned outfit was bad enough, and what was with the fake accent? Shame really, because he was quite cute otherwise.
"Sandra."
She dutifully closed her eyes at Mimi's hissed whisper. Instantly the atmosphere in the room changed. Goose flesh broke out on Sandra's arms, and Mimi screamed. Blinding light poured from the seer's fingertips.
Come to me Sandra … It's time.


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Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)
Till next week, folks.


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13 comments:

  1. Great flash. Excellently written.Really gave me the shivers

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  2. I bet Sandra regretted pushing Mimi further. A n eerie twist to your flash. What doe she have in store? Love your take on the picture.

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  3. Eek! I've got the shivers now lol

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  4. OOO- Now I want to know way more!

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  5. Oh wow! How interesting! So much in such a few words! :)

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  6. Doris, what a creepy flash! I am covered in gooseflesh and dreading my September birthday! I never ceases to amazed me the variety of creativity inside your muse. This was simple, lulling us, drawing us in to perhaps a joke or birthday ruse, then POW!! Loved it, very creative and a great take on the photo. :) xo

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  7. Terrific! This is so drawing in a strange and want to know if she does, come to him, kind of way! Wow!

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  8. A wonderful lead-in... so tempting!

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  9. I've got goosebumps. All is definitely not as it seems. Please write more of this story.

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  10. Great flash would love to know what she wished for

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  11. Wowser!! Intense!! Great flash!! What happens now? You need to continue this story.

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