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"I-I changed my mind. I can't do this."
Lynn froze, and the breath left her lungs in a big whoosh
when he wrapped one arm around her, and pulled her sharply back into his
hard frame. His scent and heat surrounded her. Richard's bare torso burned into
her exposed back, and he rubbed his stubble roughened cheek against the
sensitive skin of her neck. Her pulse jumped in answer and a spike of intense
desire made her clit tingle in need.
She felt his smile in the butterfly kisses he rained on her
skin. Interspersed with little bites
they left a heated path of awareness behind. Little darts of pain, followed by
soothing kisses, that blew all of her objections into the water. Hot breaths
puffed along her exposed shoulder, as he marched her to the plate glass window
of their hotel suite.
"Put your hands up, palms on the glass."
The edge of command in his gravelly voice sent a
rush of moisture into her knickers, and their gazes connected in the reflection
of the glass
Fathomless pools of dark desire his eyes pulled her
under his spell.
"This is what you've signed up for, have you
not, girl?"
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As ever, let me know what you thought of my teaser today.
D xx
He's not going to let her get away, is he? Nice teaser.
ReplyDeleteThis is absofreakinlutely what I signed up for! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteSometimes we don't really KNOW what we want, but once the step is taken, the chasm is not far too fall.. Once again, I love your descriptions............"butterfly kisses he rained on her skin"............"Fathomless pools of dark desire ". Just wonderful reading. <3 xo
ReplyDeleteAll I can say about this one is that I have an absolute, unyielding, and desperate desire for more. If that doesn't make it a successful tease, I don't know what would.
ReplyDeleteAs ever, you never disappoint.
ReplyDeleteYou built momentum and heat with very phrase. I love your words of her sensations you describe, like these lines- "the butterfly kisses he rained on her skin. Interspersed with little bites they left a heated path of awareness behind. Little darts of pain, followed by soothing kisses, that blew all of her objections into the water."
ReplyDeleteLoved this teaser...great descriptions...loved the foreshadowing at the end!
ReplyDeleteOoh! *shivers*
ReplyDeletelove how she goes from fear to abandon obedience great piece love the structure and the tease.... hugs T
ReplyDeleteYum! Sign me up, too. Images of the two of them against the plate glass window captured me :-)
ReplyDeleteGoddamn, Doris, you're another one on a horny kick this week. I'm liking it! It was already a sensory banquet, and then the exhibitionist fantasy kicked in. Stormingly sexy stuff.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, all of you :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully erotic. I was hanging on every word of this wonderful teaser.Great going!
ReplyDeleteVery erotic. Would love to read more
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