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Friday, 10 January 2014

Flash Fiction Friday - One of those Days #FFF

The happiest of Fridays to you all. I have just about calmed down from my release day excitement buzz, lol. It took me ages to write this flash, because I just couldn't stop bouncing yesterday.

Anyhoo - Enjoy!



Today was one of those days. Katrina had drawn the short straw—looking after the models. This one was in a foul mood, and had reduced several photographers to tears already.
The latest one ran sniffling from the room.
The man's annoyed growl in answer wrapped itself around Katrina, and the world tilted a little. Pinned in place by the sheer force of his gaze, heat pooled between her thighs, as he weighed the chains in his hands.
"You're leaving this hellhole right now, little one. At least, we can put these to good use, though."                                                              

How she'd missed this.

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Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)
Till next week, folks.


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13 comments:

  1. Unknown10 January 2014 at 11:08

    A nice little twist to this flash - sexy too!

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  2. Unknown10 January 2014 at 12:01

    Ah, he was waiting for her. I hope she ;likes what he has planned. This was a great line: "Pinned in place by the sheer force of his gaze, heat pooled between her thighs, as he weighed the chains in his hands."

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  3. Faberge Nostromo10 January 2014 at 13:31

    Steamy!

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  4. Karin Baine10 January 2014 at 13:51

    Sexy short. Any chance of the full story? :D

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  5. Muffy Wilson10 January 2014 at 19:11

    Doris, once again, your string of pearls called sentences were so captivating and descriptive. "....the world tilted a little." "....heat pooled between her thighs..." Enchanting <3 xo

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  6. Anonymous10 January 2014 at 20:15

    Excellence. I want to know what happened between them and the whole story!

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  7. S.J. Maylee10 January 2014 at 20:26

    Yum! He's kind of scary, but I like it, lol. Please add this to your list of stories to write. :)

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  8. Unknown10 January 2014 at 20:29

    Sexy! Nicely done. i like his dialogue...sighs...
    ~Decadent

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  9. Unknown10 January 2014 at 23:43

    Tease!!! I want to imbue sex in 100 words like this. LOL

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  10. Dariel Raye11 January 2014 at 01:45

    Hmm. So apparently they know one another. Great visuals! I can picture her when she first recognizes him. Hot!

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  11. Naomi Shaw11 January 2014 at 13:25

    Oh now I'm curious. I want to know the next bit. Great flasher

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  12. Rolling Muse in The Roses12 January 2014 at 21:50

    Hot, spicy! Seems he was wanting her after all. ;-) Great flash! Def yummy and I am wondering how he will put those...chains to use during the shoot. ;-)

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  13. Julian Spong13 January 2014 at 10:21

    hot flash

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