Friday, 6 December 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - Gift Wrapped #FFF

A happy Friday to you all. I found today's picture so inspiring that I've got a whole short story idea in my head now. Gotta love it when that happens!
Anyhoo, enjoy Gift Wrapped...

It was him. Hunter Jamison was back in town. Heat crept into her cheeks when he raised his head and his eyes widened in recognition. With trembling fingers she untied the ribbon holding her chemise up and let it fall to the floor. Emilia climbed into the tub with him, all too aware of his heated gaze on her naked form.
"Why, if it isn't little Miss Emilia Devereux all grown up."                

His sinful smile lit up his harsh features, and the knot of fear in her belly dissipated. She could do this. She might even enjoy her first time.


Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)
Till next week, folks.

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  1. Doris, you never fail to employ some of the most descriptive string of words! I love "Heat crept into her cheeks...." It is so exacting. Yes, this flash is going places and I can't wait to tag along. Love it!! :) xo

  2. Love his sinful smile! Great flash from a great writer!

  3. Love this. I could sense the wickedness and longing to enjoy. Great flash

  4. I suspect she will not be let down...

  5. great flash. And how cool that its given you a story idea. Means more goodies for your readers :)

  6. Your flash turned my eyes from this tired man's solitude into a hot beginning of a young woman's desires raging. I liked your interpretation.

  7. Excellent flash. Would love to read more