The Hop runs from December 17th - 20th, so that gives you plenty of time to comment, right?
*smiles*
I'm giving away a $10 Amazon GC. Please make sure you leave your e-mail in your comment, so that I can contact you if you're the winner. Now, without further ado, here is my tease.
For the picture, click here.
(Source: Facebook
(Source: Facebook
Original Source Unknown)
The intensity of the scene took her breath away, and
she stepped closer to the glass separating her from the couple engaged in play.
She once had been the woman restrained on the table. The kiss of the
flogger, every whispered encouragement, every unheard moan, as she'd arched as
far as her restraints would allow.
The room was soundproof, but her imagination worked
just fine, as the woman tensed and shook and her mouth formed a silent 'O'.
Again and again her Dom pushed her over that edge
and Lynne stood mesmerized, as arousal coursed through her veins, followed by
the sharp stab of longing. She could swear she could feel his breath feather
across her sweat slicked skin.
"It's been a long time, little one."
His voice like molten chocolate dripped into her
consciousness and two brawny arms caged her in against the glass, until she
couldn't move. His achingly familiar scent enveloped her in a sensuous embrace
and held her spell bound as though the passage of time meant nothing.
"It has," she whispered. "Nothing has
changed. I can't do this."
He spun her around and the disapproval in his amber
eyes burned deep in her soul.
"Liar."
Tantalizing Tuesday Authors use a photo prompt to tease in 200 words. Please click on the graphic to check out the other fabulous participating authors.
As ever, let me know what you thought of my teaser today.
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Oh, Doris! This one was just wonderful. I love that the picture was something she saw and wasn't her. I loved that nonetheless she kept focusing and remembering. It was very well written, and a tease like this one makes me wish it was five or six thousand words long!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Molly :-)
DeleteWhy you tease! I am so envious of the woman in this picture. Your excerpt was hot (fanning myself) You left me wanting more lol! Thanks and have a great day!
ReplyDeleteamybowens34@yahoo.com
Lol, thanks, Amy :-)
DeleteLoved it I want more. cjlps23 at gmail dot com
ReplyDelete*big grin*
DeleteAck! So... when are you expanding that into a book? I'm waiting.... .... ....
ReplyDeletemichelle at oxrider dot com
Lol, soon....
DeleteHot! Hot! Hot!!! angelarosebooks@yahoo.com
ReplyDeleteThank you :-)
DeleteMore, more, more!
ReplyDeletediamer13@yahoo.com
*smiles* Will have to work on that.
DeleteThat was so hot!! I am wishing there was more.
ReplyDeleteangiek@cfu.net
Thank you, Angie :-)
DeleteGood god that picture! Wow!
ReplyDeleteShannon
sabai30705(at)yahoo(dot)com
I know, Shannon! :-)
DeleteSo well written and breathtaking! I consider myself teased! ;)
ReplyDeleteHeh heh, thanks, Leann :-)
DeleteSo sensual. I loved it
ReplyDeleteThanks, Naomi :-)
DeleteOh my.....that was so, so hot.....please tell me it's going into one of your books!!!!
ReplyDeleteHugs. xx
foulkes.susan@gmail.com
Thanks, Susan. I think it might have to! :-)
DeleteYou are such a tease! Love the picture and excerpt. What book is it from? Great giveaway! starchaser8808@yahoo.com
ReplyDeleteIt's not in a book .. yet, lol.
DeleteI want to know what happened next!!!
ReplyDeletemarla9123@hotmail.com
Seems quite a few of you do :-)
DeleteWell, let's see.....we have voyeurism, bondage, longing, desire, confrontation, oral sex, restraints and blindfolds, hot feathery breaths, and sweat. Have I missed anything? All strung together with wonderful, descriptive words. That was wonderful, Doris, just wonderful <3 xo
ReplyDeleteThank you, Muffy :-)
DeleteGreat story in so few words, like an entire chapter full of so much! Merry Christmas to you and yours.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Gemma! Merry Christmas to you and your family too :-)
DeleteLoved the tease and the pic.
ReplyDeletelauratroxelatyahoodotcom
Thank you :-)
DeleteNice! and Hot! *puts self in ice bath to cool off* Leona.bushman@gmail.com
ReplyDeleteLol. thanks, Leona ;-)
Deleteholy beejeezus that was hot.
ReplyDelete*chuckles* Thank you :-)
DeleteHot, hot, hot
ReplyDeleteThanks :-)
DeleteWow, that was great. It makes me finish the story in my imagination. I want them to go into a room, and find out what she can and can’t do. This would make a wonderful book or short story.
ReplyDeleteYes, I think I will have to expand this one :-)
DeleteJust so fantastic thank you.
ReplyDeletemarypres(AT)gmail(DOT)com
Thanks, Mary :-)
DeleteOoh! Can't wait to see what happens between these two, Doris :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Dariel :-)
DeleteI normally don't get ito Dom and Sub, but this piece was hot. "She could swear she could feel his breath feather across her sweat slicked skin." Loved this line. You have such a scintillating way with your words to bring me into the action.you create. Outstanding Tease!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Pablo :-D
DeleteExcellent Doris would love to find out if she could do it or if he was right to call her a liar
ReplyDeleteHeh heh, oh I think he's right...
DeleteTop work, Doris. Beautifully phrased. Full of passion, kink and longing.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jake :-)
DeleteThanks again, all, for commenting :-) I've just realized with all the Christmas business I forgot to pick a winner, so without further ado, and by random selection the winner is ....
ReplyDeleteShannon. Congrats!