Tuesday, 31 December 2013

#TantalizingTuesdays - Dangerous

Happy Tuesday, folks. Here's your final tease of this year. Enjoy :-)

(Source: Facebook
Original Source Unknown)

"Invite me in."
The voice that haunted Elyssa's dreams compelled her to move, and the breath stalled in her lungs when she opened the door.
"You can't be… you're—"
"I am and I'm here. I told you I would find a way back to you, baby."
Jason's smile lit up his face, and his beloved features blurred through her tears.
"You have to invite me in, baby."
Instinctively her fingers reached out to touch him, to trace the tattoo he hadn't had before and her skin warmed under the heated intensity of his gaze. The tenseness in his shoulders stopped her, and she took a step back into the relative safety of her hallway.
"Invite me—"
"In, I know." Elyssa stepped back further and shook her head and this version of Jason snarled. He punched the doorframe with enough force to rattle the foundations and that shiver of unease trailing up her spine engulfed her in an ice cold fist.
"You're not him. He wouldn't need an invitation."
The creature on her doorstep burst into flames and his putrid, hot breath singed her hair, even as Jason's familiar scent enveloped her.

"That's my girl. I'm here. It's okay."


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As ever, let me know what you thought of my teaser today. And Happy New Year!!!

D xx 

12 comments:

  1. Oh! I really liked that one, Doris. I loved the end, the way she knew it wasn't him because he wouldn't need an invitation. That was steamy and sexy, and your character was perfectly sassy. Great tease!

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  2. Wow didn't see that coming. Loved the picture!

    Happy New Year!

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    1. Thanks, Angie, and Happy New Year! :-)

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  3. God, Doris, but I was ready for something else and you took a hard unexpected right!! The intense emotional flip was nearly visible. Your characterizations and eloquent descriptions are picturesque: "the breath stalled in her lungs". Wonderful tease <3 xo

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  4. Brilliant Tease I loved the dark edge

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  5. Steamy & intense as ever! Amazing to invoke so much emotion in so few words!

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  6. Great tantaliser! Had me on edge for a moment.

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  7. The sizzling tension between them is very high. Is he really Jason at the end? Who ever he is, he has put a lot of research intpo Jason's body and it's characteristics. I enjoyed your hot tease.

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