Friday 31 January 2014

Flash Fiction Friday - Justice #FFF

Another Friday, another flash... Enjoy :-)



Lips locked together, she ground herself into his groin in wild abandon, and he responded with sickening enthusiasm. One hand fisted in her hair, the other locked around her hips, Duncan yanked the harlot closer to him.
Did he not realize she wasn't her?
Damn it, of course he didn't. Susie had never told him about her twin. The one who should still be locked up behind bars, after the last lover she'd ripped to shreds.
She'd never told him she could shift either. Well, they were both in for a surprise. And this time justice would be hers.




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Till next week, folks.


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19 comments:

  1. That was pretty cool. Hearty chuckle from this one. Thank you.

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  2. Wow, twins eh?! Wonder if he'll figure it out before hell breaks loose ;) x

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    1. For his sake, I hope so, lol.

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  3. Ha ha! Love the idea of twins. Great flash. There's explaining to be done all around I think.

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    1. Oh yes, there certainly is :-)

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  4. The way you mind thinks and reels these ideas off amazes me!! I love this perspective. Very clever, Doris, very entertaining and more than a little ominous :) xo

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  5. There's a new shifter book right there lol

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  6. Well done nice twist love this .... hugs T

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  7. Intriguing. Please tell me there's a story in there.

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    1. Oh, I'm sure there is, lol. Just not sure I've got the time to write it.

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  8. Love it!! Full of suspense and hot fire. :) I wonder what he'll think when he finds out. Great flash.

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