Friday, 7 June 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - Revenge #FFF

Happy Friday folks. Time for another Flash. Enjoy!

A blast of hot air knocked her to her feet and she made a grab for the frame to stop herself from being blown into the abyss below. She'd made it out of that hell hole. There was no way the very air she craved was going to send her back into her captor's arms. Heat seared her lungs as she took desperate gasps of the life giving substance. With it came the change, and she reveled in the freedom. Head thrown back she gave herself up to the shift. Skin stretched, wings spread.
           Revenge was going to be sweet.


Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)

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Till next week, folks.

D x


  1. What an interesting take on the picture. Where is she? What has she escaped from? I'm sure revenge will be sweet!

    1. Yes, I reckon it will be. Another flash that I might have to expand :-)

  2. wow,that gripped me and I so didn't see the end coming. Thank you

  3. Very interesting piece there. I wondered what she escaped from, and yes, revenge is best served cold.

  4. Love! <3 Revenge suits me in a giant way just now and your depiction is perfect!

  5. You made the image come alive in my head. Nicely done.

  6. Ooh very interesting Doris!

  7. Beautiful image of her escaping the place she fell to before. Concise wording was done well to tell your story.