Enjoy The Bench
Rosie swallowed down the bile clogging her throat.
How dare they? In broad day light and on their bench. Max had never been
keen on public displays of affection, but this had been their spot. The
place where he had proposed, the place they had been so happy before.
Always before, before the accident, and the damn
brunette who had taken Rosie's place. Before, how Rosie hated that word, but
she was ready now. She'd practiced, and she would show him.
She raised her hand and concentrated. Slowly it
formed and the rest of her body materialized. Vengeance was hers.
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Till next week, folks.
Oh, Doris! Raised her hand with WHAT??!! Fabulous cliffhanger! :) xo
ReplyDeleteThanks, Muffy :-D
DeleteWhat would be her vengeance? How dare Max ,leave her. I'd like to know what the accident was. I hope Rosie has her way.
ReplyDeleteOh she will, I reckon. Thanks, Pablo :-)
DeleteYou gave me chills and just enough to form a story in my head. Fabulous.
ReplyDeleteThank you, S. J. :-)
DeleteYou always surprise me. I wonder what she'll do
ReplyDeleteThanks, Michelle :-)
DeleteDAMN Now I have to know even more. What did she do to get her vengeance. Brilliant flash
ReplyDeleteLol, thanks, Julez :-)
DeleteSuch a super flash Doris. SO much emotion. xx
ReplyDeleteShivers. I loved the twist in this story. Have me looking over my shoulder now. I wonder what she'll do next? Awesome flash!
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