Tuesday, 15 October 2013

#TantalizingTuesdays - The Ultimate Test

Happy Tuesday, folks. Here's your tease for today. Be warned it's hawt!

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"Are you ready for your punishment, pet?"
A shiver rolled over her skin, when he flicked the knife open. Head bent, knees spread, she was the perfect picture of submission, if you over looked her clenched fists.
James smiled at that little sign of her spirit.  Even with wrist restraints to help ground her, his bratty sub rebelled.
He slid the blade under her chin, and exerted just enough pressure to force her chin up.
"I can't hear you, pet."
"Ye-es, Sir." Her breathless reply made his cock harden and he firmed his voice and pressed that little bit harder for the knife edge to dig into her soft skin.
"Look at me."
Wide eyed she stared up at him and he simply waited.                                                 
Slowly, those fingers unfurled.
He circled her, letting the knife slide across her throat in a wide sweep, until it once again rested under her chin.
The urge to mark that skin, to draw a thin trail of blood, coursed through his veins, but he'd pushed her enough for now.
"Good girl. That wasn't so hard, was it?"
She blinked rapidly, and in the depths of her beautiful eyes he saw it— absolute trust and submission.

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As ever, let me know what you thought of my teaser today.

D xx


  1. Dang! The autumn chill in this room just disappeared after reading that. Very hot!

  2. The chill with me became colder. Definitely full of angst and suspense.

  3. That was so beautiful, it gave me shivers.

  4. You gave me chills with this teaser. Excellently written. I loved it

  5. Chilling, daring and decidedly HAWT!!:) xo

  6. Hawt indeed! Powerful and very wonderfully written. Loved it.

  7. Can I breathe now? Holy cow!! Wow! Talk about power and control and deep submission. This had me gripping my chair as I read it. If he's just starting with knife play what will her punishment be? What did she do to get to this point? I def want to read more. Great Teaser!

    1. Thanks :-) And yeah you can breathe, lol.

  8. Definitely chilling! Holy smokes! That's a hell of a tease!

  9. I'd never read a scene using knife play before so I never really understood the appeal. Your excerpt brought it to life. That was an incredibly intimate moment for the couple. Beautifully written.

  10. It's an exquisitely written piece and comes close to capturing the appeal of knife-play for me. However I still can't get past the wtf factor when it comes to more advanced forms of bdsm.

    1. Thanks, Jake, and yeah, needle play is one of those for me. Really don't get the appeal of that, myself. :-)

  11. Beautifully written and very powerful