Friday, 30 May 2014

Flash Fiction Friday - Getting Noticed #FFF

Happy Friday, folks. My flash today is all about getting noticed...

Heart beating in his throat, he waited in line with the others. If this didn't get him noticed then he didn't know what else to do.
He daren't look toward the approaching footsteps, lest the guard would see the excitement in his eyes. If that bastard thought he actually wanted to see the head of the prison, he would throw him into isolation again.
Josh had seen it happen too many times. This was his chance and he was going to take it.
The heavy footsteps finally stopped in front of him and he held his breath. What would happen?


Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)
Till next week, folks.
D x


  1. tense teaser Doris. Hope we find out what happens next

  2. Awesome flash. I loved the suspense. I wonder what will happen. :)

  3. Great tension and aniticipation