Tuesday, 15 January 2013

#TantalizingTuesday His Gift

I have joined the talented bunch of authors participating in Tantalizing Tuesdays.

Tantalizing Tuesday Authors use a photo prompt to write a two-hundred word teaser every Tuesday.

Here's mine. Enjoy!



She looked devastatingly beautiful, teetering on the edge, as she was. Her breasts bounced gently with the agonizingly slow rise and fall of her hips, as she rode him. His body tightened in need, the urge to take over, almost unbearable, but he forced himself to watch her climb. Little beads of perspiration glistened on her silky soft skin. Her lips parted and her little panting breaths told him how close she truly was.
"Please … please, Sir … I need to…"
"What do you need, my love, tell me." His voice sounded hoarse, laced with arousal and need, and damn pride of the submission he witnessed.
"I need to go faster, Sir, please…"
The thumb settling on her clit made her shudder, and the tremors started. One of his hands dug into the soft flesh to hold her still, and she moaned her need.
"Fly, my little one, for me. Let go."
Given free reign they increased their pace, and her eyes flew open and sought his. Wide with desire and shimmering with tears and love, they seared his soul, and he dug his hands into the arm rest of his wheel chair.
His vision of the couple on the bed blurred, as his own tears fell.
"I love you, Sir."


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If you've enjoyed my little tease, then leave me a comment. 'Til next week!

D x

36 comments:

  1. Love it D! Especially the ending!

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  2. Oh, the ending was so unexpected and sad. A great scene!

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  3. Loved it and the twist at the end.

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  4. That is totally beautiful... Perfection.x

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  5. That was simply wonderful. Excellent pacing, description, and just beautiful. Caught completely and happily by surprise at the end. Fabulous.

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  6. Beautifully written, excellently described. Really liked it

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  7. Powerful stuff, Doris and that antepenultimate sentence twist! Challenging...

    BTW, I had to look up antepenultimate to make sure I was using correctly.

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    1. I'm very impressed at the usage of that word! ;-) Thakks, Faberge.

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  8. Super hawt! Great photo, your teaser works perfectly with it.

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  9. That was so so beautiful. Wow. I'm not sure if I should feel joy or sadness. Very powerful.

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  10. I like the romance in the end. You described the action appropriately to the photograph.

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  11. Loved the twist, the photo and the sensuality!

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  12. That was awesome! I didn't expect the ending!! You rock!!!

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  13. Very erotic there; descriptive and excellently written. Nice Teaser.

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  14. Wonderfully sensual. You can really feel the connection between them.

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  16. Amazing teaser. So visual and full of sexy hotness. The ending was brilliant, I never would have guessed it

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  17. Goddamn, Doris, welcome to Tantalizing Tuesday. You really set out your stall with a fiercely erotic and romantic piece of flash-fiction. Fiery throughout, yielding to tenderness. Strong stuff. Loved it.

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