Happy Tuesday, folks. I have just about recovered from all the excitement that was yesterday's Release day. So, without further ado, here's your teaser for today.
She
should move, do something, anything, but she was too afraid of what may come
out of her mouth if she did. She knew the rules—she had always known them. It
wasn't his fault this day had come too soon.
She
clutched the pillow to herself and turned her head away from the
mirrors—mirrors that had seen her writhing in pleasure so many times, her limbs
heavy and languid with desire. If she looked at them all she would see was his
head between her legs, her body arched and open to him as he played her like he
did his piano. A shudder went through her and she shut her eyes against the
memories assaulting her. She'd treasured their snatched moments together in
this room. The love they'd shared, the whispered dreams and hopes, his scent,
his weight, forever imprinted on her body. The sheets still held his scent, the
pillow, traces of his hair.
She
clutched it closer to her, crushing it almost in her desperate need to keep him
with her. But she had to let him go. Her gaze fell on the crushed black dress
on the floor. She had a funeral to go to.
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Let me know what you thought of my teaser today.
Till next week, folks.
D x
Doris that is totally splendid.. I am left wondering, assuming in fact that it is his funeral she is off to...xx
ReplyDeleteI think it must be someone else's funeral. Something that now means she has other responsibilities... It's great Doris!
ReplyDeleteI have said it before and I'll say it again...you are cruel!
ReplyDeleteHi Doris lol
ReplyDeleteMy heart is clenching. This poor woman. I've assumed it is his funeral but the other comments have me wondering... either way, quite the tease!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written, poignant and emotive. I like the way you keep us guessing.
ReplyDeleteWow. What a great tease!
ReplyDeleteWrenching.
ReplyDeleteThe twists at the end of your flashes always get me. Well done.
ReplyDeleteLoved this. Was not expecting it to end the way it did after such a sensual build-up
ReplyDeleteDoris this scene is so beautifully, well written. I felt a rock drop in my stomach at the end with the funeral.
ReplyDeleteThanks, all :-D I love the way you all interpreted this differently!
ReplyDeleteExcellent writing and powerful punchline. I love it
ReplyDeleteErotic, romantic and with a wonderful dark and ambiguous ending. There's a poetry to your work that I really enjoy, Doris. More please!
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