Tantalizing Tuesday Authors use a photo prompt to write a two-hundred word teaser every Tuesday.
"Now
do you believe me?" His deep baritone sent flutters of awareness over her
sensitized nerve endings, settling deep in her core. The warmth of his naked
torso warmed her frozen skin and she melted into his embrace, as his hands
settled on her breasts. They cupped the heavy globes and his thumbs tweaked her
nipples into little tight buds of need.
Moisture
pooled between her thighs and her knees buckled under the onslaught on her
senses. He inhaled deeply and licked a path of need in the valley of her
breasts. She grabbed his head and pulled him closer, her body responding to him
of its own accord.
"That's
my girl. Let me help you to forget. He's not worth your time."
She
whimpered her acquiescence, and he kissed her tears away. His mouth claimed
hers in a kiss designed to worship.
"He's
a fucking fool to not appreciate you. Don't cry." His whispered words,
delivered in between ever more passionate kisses soothed her troubled mind, and
the lump of hurt their discovery had caused, dissipated like a whisper of
smoke.
Across
the street the cause of her pain reached his pinnacle, just as her oldest friend
freed her soul.
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If you've enjoyed my little tease, then leave me a comment. 'Til next week!
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Wow, very breath-taking. I love the erotic scene in her and it was awesome!
ReplyDeleteLovely, Doris! This was beautiful and overwhelming, and I just adored the way the physical served as a tool for the emotional in such a wonderfully crafted way.
ReplyDeleteExcellent yet heartbreaking and hot at the same time. Wonderful tease
ReplyDeleteThat is so beautifully written... it all just comes together in a superb way.. Loved it my new friend...xx
ReplyDeleteThanks all :-) Took me ages to find the right pic this week, so I'm glad you all like my tease.
ReplyDeleteWoven together so well - the emotional release tied to the physical - so poignant.
ReplyDeleteI loved the way you brought everything together and built the tease atn the beginning, lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Paloma and Gemma :-D
ReplyDeleteThey way your words of love evolved to the end was fabulous. Nice tie into the photo.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Pablo
DeleteDevious, delicious and touching, with the final line zooming out to give the 3rd person perspective. A cunning touch.
ReplyDeleteAmazing teaser. I loved the way your words crafted this to give perfect visuals. Excellent writing
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