Tuesday, 22 January 2013

#TantalizingTuesdays The View

It's Tuesday and that can only mean one thing. Time for a teaser.

Tantalizing Tuesday Authors use a photo prompt to write a two-hundred word teaser every Tuesday.

"Now do you believe me?" His deep baritone sent flutters of awareness over her sensitized nerve endings, settling deep in her core. The warmth of his naked torso warmed her frozen skin and she melted into his embrace, as his hands settled on her breasts. They cupped the heavy globes and his thumbs tweaked her nipples into little tight buds of need.
Moisture pooled between her thighs and her knees buckled under the onslaught on her senses. He inhaled deeply and licked a path of need in the valley of her breasts. She grabbed his head and pulled him closer, her body responding to him of its own accord.
"That's my girl. Let me help you to forget. He's not worth your time."
She whimpered her acquiescence, and he kissed her tears away. His mouth claimed hers in a kiss designed to worship.
"He's a fucking fool to not appreciate you. Don't cry." His whispered words, delivered in between ever more passionate kisses soothed her troubled mind, and the lump of hurt their discovery had caused, dissipated like a whisper of smoke.
Across the street the cause of her pain reached his pinnacle, just as her oldest friend freed her soul.

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If you've enjoyed my little tease, then leave me a comment. 'Til next week!

D x


  1. Wow, very breath-taking. I love the erotic scene in her and it was awesome!

  2. Lovely, Doris! This was beautiful and overwhelming, and I just adored the way the physical served as a tool for the emotional in such a wonderfully crafted way.

  3. Excellent yet heartbreaking and hot at the same time. Wonderful tease

  4. That is so beautifully written... it all just comes together in a superb way.. Loved it my new friend...xx

  5. Thanks all :-) Took me ages to find the right pic this week, so I'm glad you all like my tease.

  6. Woven together so well - the emotional release tied to the physical - so poignant.

  7. I loved the way you brought everything together and built the tease atn the beginning, lovely.

  8. They way your words of love evolved to the end was fabulous. Nice tie into the photo.

  9. Devious, delicious and touching, with the final line zooming out to give the 3rd person perspective. A cunning touch.

  10. Amazing teaser. I loved the way your words crafted this to give perfect visuals. Excellent writing