The Romance Reviews

Tuesday, 5 March 2013

#TantalizingTuesdays His Return

Is it me or is time just whizzing by. It's Tuesday, so here's your teaser. I'll be interested to see how you read this, because my hubby drew a completely different conclusion to the one I was aiming for...


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Pinned by his weight, owned, surrounded, claimed, with her body still shuddering with delicious aftershocks, she reveled in his possession. He ground his hips into her core one last time, and chuckled at her gasp of pleasure.
"Look at me, baby."
Her eyes flew open at his whispered command, and she lost herself in the tenderness of his amber gaze. How she'd missed him, missed this connection they had. She wasn't herself when he wasn't with her.  When he snug into her bed, naked and aroused, that morning, she'd squealed her delight.
He'd taken her hard and fast, branding her, making her his, but this time, they had made love— a slow torturous joining of their bodies and minds that had tears of joy seeping from her eyes. He kissed the tears away, and rested his forehead on hers, their breaths mingling, as he softened inside her.
She moaned her denial, and he smiled.
"Give me a minute, baby. I'm not done with you yet.
She smiled through her tears, and he kissed her with so much passion and tenderness, she sighed her contentment into his mouth.
The crash from the room next door broke the moment.
"Daddy is home!"



Tantalizing Tuesday Authors use a photo prompt to tease in 200 words. Please click on the graphic to check out the other fabulous participating authors.

Let me know what you thought of my teaser today.

Till next week, folks.

D x



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25 comments:

  1. Unknown5 March 2013 at 01:28

    A sweet homecoming... Too bad the kids are going to interrupt before round two. :-)

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    1. Anonymous5 March 2013 at 12:49

      Yep, well strictly speaking it's round three ;-)

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  2. Raven McAllan5 March 2013 at 08:25

    I love this... And I bet every parent can relate to it in one way, and every bloke in love with his woman in another...
    ( and many cocks are now crowing YES!!)

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  3. Unknown5 March 2013 at 08:43

    So tender living and sensual!

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  4. Kiru Taye5 March 2013 at 11:54

    LOL. I can see why your hubby thought different but the guy is definitely the daddy.

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  5. Unknown5 March 2013 at 13:53

    SWOON! I can feel the tenderness and passion in this tease!!! :)

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  6. gemma parkes5 March 2013 at 17:25

    Loved the sensuality, l was so engrossed in their love that l actually jumped when the kids shouted!

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    1. Anonymous5 March 2013 at 21:13

      Hehe, sorry to make you jump ;-)

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  7. Unknown5 March 2013 at 18:57

    This is fab D! :) x

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  8. Angelica Dawson5 March 2013 at 20:25

    God that is so familiar. grumble!

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  9. Anonymous6 March 2013 at 14:19

    This is so tender and beautiful, I was lost in it. The door slam actually made me say "Damn!"

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  10. Kay Rogal7 March 2013 at 23:31

    I think it is beautiful writing :-) love the pic too!

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  11. Unknown7 March 2013 at 23:57

    This was beautiful. Loved it.

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  12. Anonymous8 March 2013 at 06:43

    Doris, this was by far tantalizing, very erotic, and as always sensual. I'm going to grab one of your books to read more of you. Sounds like you'll have a fan.

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    1. Anonymous8 March 2013 at 11:09

      Thanks so much, Ray. Hope you enjoy whichever one you'll grab :-D

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  13. pablo michaels8 March 2013 at 20:05

    "Daddy is home" broke the tender, erotic, and romantic mood I felt reading that far. You wrote your Teaser excellently.

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