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"I'm sorry, I should have told you."
The whispered words settled in his gut like lead, and made
him feel like a complete heel. Still, coming face to face with her past like
this, had thrown him for six.
"Yes, you should have done." He ground the words out
through gritted teeth, and flexed the smarting knuckles of his right hand. The
rush of adrenalin and the grim satisfaction of seeing her ex-client go down
like a sack of potatoes had been worth the pain, and the undoubted loss of his
job.
"No, one talks to you like that—no one."
She pulled him closer, wrapping her stocking clad legs
around his hips, and he took a deep calming breath of the unique scent that was
all her. Loosening the death grip he had on his whisky laced coffee, he
banished the look of disappointment on his father's face from his mind.
His mother's words echoed around his brain.
"She's scum. I told you this would happen."
He could see his parents glaring at them now, through the
open door to the kitchen.
Raising his cup in a mock salute, he smiled.
"The past doesn't matter. Let's go home, baby."
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Till next week, folks.
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Brilliant! Although I'm now imagining a truly sordid past for her...
ReplyDeleteHeh heh, well... Imagine away ;-)
DeleteWhat a tease! Well done as always, Doris. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sandra :-)
DeleteA tantalising treat!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Michaela x
DeleteOh l love a noble man who'll do anything for his love! Great post!
ReplyDeleteYep, me too :-)Thanks, Gemma.
DeleteI want to know about the past.It must have been a colourful one owing to the fact he decked her ex client. An excellent teaser. Well written and full of emotion, leaving me hanging on for more
ReplyDeleteI believe it was... Thanks, Naomi :-)
DeleteLoved the teaser! Made me want more.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it :-D
DeleteI love a mystery! Great job! What was her past? Hope you'll write more of it!
ReplyDeleteI might have to :-)
DeleteWhoa! Talk about standing up for your girl.
ReplyDelete:-) My kind of man.
DeleteBeautiful, compelling teaser. What did her parents dislike or loathe about her? I'm glad he chose to take her home rather than subjecting her to more scorn from his parents.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Pablo.
DeleteA great story, cunningly unravelled. Tease in the best sense of the word - so much included in those 200 words.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jake :-D
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