Friday, 21 February 2014

Flash Fiction Friday - Big Mistake #FFF

Happy Friday, folks. Enjoy today's flash!



"Stay, please. Don't leave me."
Already he could feel her slipping away. Like the sands of time in the hour glass she slipped through his fingers, as the poison spread through her veins. Poison that had been meant for him.
If only they hadn't swapped glasses, it would be his veins collapsing under the liquid silver death. He kissed her clammy skin, her precious eyes, clouding over in pain, as she took her last breath, and he roared his agony into the night.

They wanted to know who the vamps were, did they? He would show them. Revenge was his.

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Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)
Till next week, folks.


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11 comments:

  1. Excellent flash. Dark yet heartbreaking

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  2. So much story & emotion in 100 words!!

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  3. Excellent flash if it was a bit dark. I need to know more of this story

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  4. Oh boy! They should be very afraid. His broken heart will most certainly fuel his revenge. Beautiful emotion in just 100. Bravo.

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  5. I really enjoyed this flash, Doris. It was sooooo human, begging, pleading, negotiating, acceptance and the resolution of revenge. Slam-packed, artfully crafted and full of vivid descriptions...'collapsing under the liquid silver death'....'he roared his agony into the night". I'd say those say it all. Loved it. xo

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  6. Mmm. Sounds like the beginning of another great story!

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  7. This made me cry.
    You captured his emotions perfectly.

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  8. WOW!! Griping and powerful, and full of emotion and passion. I hope he is able to get his revenge. Great Flash! :)

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