Tuesday, 18 February 2014

#TantalizingTuesdays - Consequences

Time to tease you all. Enjoy!

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She trembled with the effort, but Sir had told her to lay still. Just like he'd told her to stay away from the party.
She'd disobeyed him then, and she wasn't going to do so again. If only she'd listened, the incident with her boss never would have happened.
Damn it, she'd done so well to avoid the man's wandering hands all evening, but he'd caught up with her when she'd been waiting for her ride.  She could still feel his alcohol laced breath on her skin, and a shiver went through her.
Before she could as much as dig her stilettos into the man's foot, Sir had been there, but her relief had been short-lived. He'd been furious.
A whimper escaped her as he slowly pulled the belt out of its loops and curled it in his hand.
"Ready to wipe the slate clean, pet?"
His deep voice wrapped itself around her senses, and she nodded.
The first strike took her breath away, and the rest of the blows hurt, but not as much as the knowledge that she'd disappointed him.
She was sobbing by the time he pulled her into a hug.
"There, it's all over now, pet."





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As ever, let me know what you thought of my teaser today. 

D xx 

14 comments:

  1. How wonderful and beautiful to show a sub/dom punishment situation that actually IS punishment and not just sex games. This was great Doris. I really, really loved it.

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  2. Damn, that's what I call serious punishment! An ass-whipping to never forget, LOL! Nice post.

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  3. I couldn't decipher if their relationship was a consenting dom/sub or real capital punishment. I was relieved when he stopped belting her and hugged her. You wrote a new twist in do/sub relationships. Well-done.

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  4. Wow, you created 3D people in such few words. I really got into her mind -- my gut is clenched as I type, LOL

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  5. Great teaser, Excellently written. I could feel her relief when he finally stopped the punishment and hugged her

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  6. I agree with Reese, Doris. Exceptional piece of work in a palatable 3D perspective. Clever, beautifully written, loved it. xo

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  7. Perfect! You made this unfold before my eyes - hero, lover, master. What more can I say?

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  8. He's one harsh master. But it seems they have a good understanding. Perfectly constructed and delivered, Doris.

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  9. Thanks so much everyone for your comments :-)

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  10. Excellently written tease of disobedience and the consequences that follow

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