Friday 28 February 2014

Flash Fiction Friday - Closing Time #FFF

Happy Friday, folks. Enjoy's today's offering :-)

Closing time had never been so much fun. Her feet might be killing her, and she'd had to endure countless gropes and lewd comments thanks to her outfit, but Jim had finally taken notice.
How many times had she fantasized about being sat on this counter with Jim between her legs, when she was wiping up yet another coffee spill? His stubble created shivers of anticipation against her skin, as his large hand grabbed her thigh and grazed her slit.
"I've got you now. Sleeping on the job again, I see."
She struggled awake to Jim's smirk.

"You're fired. Unless…"


Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)
Till next week, folks.

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  1. Oh you Tease! I want to know more. Love the build up which was getting steamy then you leave it there!
    LOL x

  2. You can't leave it there. now you finish that sentence...please :)

    1. Hehehe, well, I might expand this one...

  3. Damn! How long has it taken him to notice her? I'd like to read what happens next. It's time she taught him a lesson when to respond to a woman when she's luring his basic instincts. Great flash!

  4. excellent flash left me wanting to read a lot more

  5. wow!! hot! I wonder if she'll do the unless... or walk out? I hope she doesn't walk out, :) great flash!!

  6. Very naughty! Caught sleeping, or caught doing so much more? Seems like a perfect coincidence....