Friday, 1 August 2014

Flash Fiction Friday - Surprise #FFF

Happy Friday, folks. Such a  delicious picture today, and it took me along a different path today.
Enjoy - Surprise!



Ellie’s stomach tightened in delicious anticipation when she saw the determined expression on his face. He twirled his fingers in a silent demand, and she obediently spun for him in the little black dress he’d chosen for her to wear.
“Very nice,” he said in that deep gravelly voice that instantly dampened her panties. “Lie on the sofa, and close your eyes.”
He grinned at her haste.
The minute she did the sofa depressed and unfamiliar fingers pushed her dress down. Ellie gasped and looked across to her Master.
Sat in his wheel chair, he smiled at her.

“Happy Birthday.”

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Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)
Till next week, folks.
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13 comments:

  1. I bet she is singing silently to herself. Very nice twist, Doris. I hadn't seen that coming. Such a layer of depth that could take this story more places than not.....xo

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    1. Thanks, Muffy. I might have to write the longer story here. Haven't had a hero in a wheel chair for some time :-)

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  2. I wasn't expecting that ... Wow excellent flash

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  3. WOW!! Great Flash! I loved the twist at the end. Great story. :) *shivers* :)

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