(Source: Facebook
Original Source Unknown)
“Are
you sure you want to see these?”
Ryan
passed the thick envelope over with obvious reluctance. The portly private
investigator had come highly recommended, and he didn’t usually show any
emotions. However, every crease of his rumpled suit screamed his unease at her,
and Monique’s stomach roiled.
This
was going to be so much worse than she’d first thought.
“I
was right to be concerned then?” She forced the question past the lump in her
throat and fought back tears when he nodded.
It
was one thing to suspect your husband was having an affair. Another thing
entirely to be confronted with the evidence, and to know that you would finally
see the skank he was cheating with.
With
a deep breath in to calm her shaking fingers, Monique opened the envelope.
Every
slide revealed her husband in more and more revealing poses with her.
And out in public for fuck’s sake. The camera had caught the sensuous slide of
Jackson’s fingers as he trailed them up the woman’s leg, and under her skirt,
before he kissed her.
They
had no need to hide, because the world would think it was her.
She
was going to kill her twin.
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Ouch! Things are about to get ugly! I wish to see the next segment, because you got me curious of what will happen next. Nice tease -- you tease! LOL!
ReplyDeleteHeh heh, thanks, Ray :-)
DeleteGreat match for the photo Doris, you pulled me right in. I am with Ray. I want to know what happens next. great Tease xx
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jessica :-)
DeleteAnother great twist! I love the idea of thinking he can get away with it. This will definitely put a rift in the family. Great tease
ReplyDeleteYeees, I should think so :-)
DeleteFantastic teaser with a great twist. More please
ReplyDeleteThanks, Naomi :-)
DeleteLove it! And I too would like to know more... ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Susie :-)
DeleteI am always please with the little twists that escape the comforts of your nasty mind. Sisters are blood, she can't kill her. Kill the husband off, the cheating cad. Forensics won't be able to prove which of the sisters did it, so she'll be acquitted, get all his money and her sister will pine for him painfully and guiltily for the rest of her life, or get framed for his murder. You are a clever delight, Doris. Love your work. Every.Single.Time. xo
ReplyDeleteOh I like your thinking, Muffy, lol.
Deletegreat ease yes I want to see more..... this is a great story :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Theresa :-)
DeleteNicely done. Now I want to see the cat fight :D
ReplyDeleteHer Twin? That's a great twist. If I were him I'd come up with this excuse, saying "I didn't know she was your twin. I thought it was you, darling."
ReplyDeleteWicked tease. Loved the twin ending wasn't expecting that at all
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