Friday, 29 November 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - The Light #FFF

Happy, Friday, folks. Here's today's Friday flash.

Bounding through the forest, his paws ate up the damp earth. Secure in the knowledge that he was close, he gave his beast free reign. He felt the light before he saw it. It darted across his skin like rays of acid, and his wolf howled his distress. Fur changed to skin, bones cracked and re-arranged until he stood naked in the middle of the clearing. Forced to shift, he shielded his eyes from the chilling light, and he smiled.
Light hunters.

He was ready for them this time. Time to take his revenge on the killers of his kind.


Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)
Till next week, folks.

D x  


  1. Okay, so where is the rest. Like the idea of Light Hunters and how the hero might outwit them.

  2. Is he the only survivor of his kind? I like his transformation from wolf to disguised human.

  3. I was totally drawn into your story and desperately want more. Great flash.

  4. Doris, your descriptive use of words strung together to build images is phenomenal: "paws ate up the damp earth", "across his skin like rays of acid", "bones cracked and re-arranged". Outstanding.:) xo

  5. Fab flash Doris! This is another of your flashes that could be a full story :)

  6. Great tease Hope he gets his revenge

  7. Great story unfolding in so few words! Loved it!