Tuesday, 19 November 2013

#TantalizingTuesdays - Betrayal

Time to tease you all again. Enjoy - Betrayal...

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"Forgive me, please."
The heavy mounds of her breasts molded themselves against his shoulder blades.  Like poisoned darts her words pierced his soul, as her breathless apology left a hollow ache in his heart.
Surrounded by the scent, and the softness of the woman he'd thought his alone, the truth of her betrayal cut through him like a knife.
Sex would not erase the pictures on his mind. That exact moment, their connection severed with the deadly precision of a guillotine's blade.
She slid her hands around his waist to tease his cock through his jeans, and he bit back a curse. Marina grazed his earlobe and her tongue teased and licked a path of shame, not arousal. Disgust sat in his stomach, ready to spew forth with the hateful words, he knew would make him feel better, yet he couldn't bring himself to utter.
He disentangled himself, and steeled his heart against the false tears in her eyes.
"I suggest you get dressed."
Something in the tight control he had on his emotions must have registered, because she clutched the sheet to her chest.
"Ben?" Her outstretched hand fell to her side when he shook his head.
"It's over!"                                                                                                                       

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As ever, let me know what you thought of my teaser today.

D xx 


  1. It's so amazing to be able to generate real dramatic response in so short of a time frame and to do it not with the sexual tension but with the emotional tension. Wonderful tease, Doris!

  2. Nice teaser Doris. Like the emotion

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  4. "..............licked a path of shame, not arousal. Disgust sat in his stomach, ready to spew forth with the hateful words............." Doris, that is some very poignant well crafted writing. The pent up emotion charged the scene and his struggle to maintain his control and rage was palpable. That was outstanding. I didn't want it to be.....over. :) xo

  5. Very powerful excellently described tease. I could feel his pain