It
was the eyes that drew him. He would recognize them everywhere, and Sean
skidded to a stop at this picture. Rhianne looked like he remembered her,
before the car crash that changed their lives forever.
Blood
rushed in his ears, and the room spun, as his mind went overdrive. He scanned
the picture for a signature, anything to give him more information.
“Beautiful,
isn’t she?” The deep voice behind him made him spin round and his reply stuck
in his throat, as he took in the young woman by this man’s side.
No.
“It’s
how I see my mother.”
****
Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)
Till next week, folks.
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Another good one Doris sounds sad
ReplyDeleteThanks, Julie, and yes it is a bad sad.
Deleteoh, what an interesting take. The loss is subtle but strong when it connects. Great piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Angelica :-)
DeleteThat was awesome!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it, Angie :-)
DeleteVery intriguing post!
ReplyDelete*smiles* Thanks, Ray :-)
DeleteWonderful last line. Totally unexpected. Great flasher Doris x
ReplyDeleteThank you, Naomi :-)
DeleteAnd once again, there's a story to be written. You must tell me more! So many subtle elements drew me into the characters.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Dariel, will add it to my list :-)
DeleteGreat take on the pic. Curiously intriguing :-)
ReplyDeleteWow what a twist! Spooky!
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