A little glimpse of my tortured vamp.
This is why he didn't get involved
with anyone. The heavy feeling in his gut, the tightness in his chest, the
bitter disappointment that coursed through his veins slicing them open, until
it felt as though acid was fueling his body.
He'd saved her life and all she saw
was a monster. It had taken all his centuries' worth of control to stop the
bloodlust invading every one of his senses last night, when he'd entered her
house. She had lain in a pool of her own blood on the bathroom floor, every
beat of her heart draining the life force out of her. The bloody imprint of her
head on the side of the bath, a testament to what must have happened.
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Blooooooooody. LOL. You can really feel his pain. Good six :)
ReplyDeletehe is a star.. tortured, sad, happy and strong.. and ohhh shivery
ReplyDeleteThanks Alexandra :-)
ReplyDeleteAnd *giggles* Raven, is there one of my heroes that hasn't made you shiver? ;-)
I definitely feel his angst, poor baby.
ReplyDeleteI love this six.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lila and Diane :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is so sad. I wonder if he can still save her? Does he want to...
ReplyDeleteGreat six, Doris. Yet another book for my TBR pile :)
ReplyDeleteDianne, he does, he does. She's his destiny after all!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lucy and squee :-)
Very emotional, sad piece.
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