Friday, 28 November 2014

Flash Fiction Friday - Bad Day #FFF

Happy Friday, folks. Here's today's flash. You could say he's having a bad day...

“Oh, I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to disturb you. I was told to wait in here, and…”
Matthew stopped babbling, when the ethereal beauty didn’t respond at all, just sipped from her cup of…what was that? Chamomile, maybe. She was way out of his league, that’s for sure. He cleared his throat in an effort to get her attention, yet she continued to stare out into the vast whiteness behind the window.
Far too white for the dreary weather he’d left behind outside…
Unease crawled up his spine.
“Wait a minute, am I?”
She turned and smiled.
“Dead…? Yes.”


Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)

Till next week, folks.
D x


  1. Whoa! Chilling! That was a game-changer in the end.

  2. So very clever, that last twist. Yeppers, he is definitely having a bad day. Well done, Doris. xo

    1. Just a tad of a bad day, huh, lol. Thanks, Muffy :-)

  3. Great flash, Doris! So I guess he's in heaven? Or maybe she's just gonna torture him with her beauty?

  4. Fab flasher. I didn't see that coming, yet it fits, perfectly. Wonderful.