(Source: Pinterest)
There
wasn’t enough water in the world to take away the pain, to erase the memories
of that collapse, the desperate search for Drew. It should have been him who lost his life,
not the little brother who followed him into the force. The hot spray washed away
the physical evidence in the dirty rainbow swirls of the plughole by his feet.
Sean stood immobile, paralyzed by grief, and the stark reminder how precious
life was.
“Sean.”
The
station commander’s deep, gravelly voice broke through the haze, and Sean
hissed through his teeth, when his boss’s strong arms gathered him close, and
Sean allowed the tears to flow.
“My
sweet boy. Let it all go. We’re the only ones here.”
The
words he never thought to hear from the one man he couldn’t have, the man, he
needed more than life itself right now, finally caused him to break down, and
he sank into the hug, as Duncan turned Sean to face him.
“I
know… It will get easier, and I’m here, if you want me.”
Warm
lips caressed his nape, and Sean shut his eyes and gave a silent prayer of
thanks.
You
were right all along, little bro.
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How fitting with the date! Very emotional Doris. Xx
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jessica :-)
DeleteOh, they are in for a difficult time, I think, but I hope they work through it together.
ReplyDeleteI reckon they will. Thanks, Angelica :-)
DeleteYou have a knack for pulling the rush of emotion out of me, but you have outdone yourself today. None of us should have to face life without someone we love - an innocent. If a wife loses her husband in death, she is a widow, if children lose their parents, they are orphans, but there is no word for the death of a child, perhaps because the lose is so unspeakable. And we acknowledge today, those who paid the highest price for our freedom, and you did it beautifully. Amen. xo
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Muffy x
DeleteThe pang of loss, and the long awaited love are such a strongly bittersweet combination. Very well done, Doris, I'd love to read more of this (and I'm not usually one for military stories!)
ReplyDeleteThanks Phoenix. I think I might have to write their story :-)
Deletebeautiful and very emotional I love it
ReplyDeleteThank you, Julez x
DeleteOh Doris! I was almost in tears myself. Such an emotional teaser. I just hope he can find future comfort knowing now what he does
ReplyDeleteFrom the pic, I would've thought that they were getting intimate in the shower, but from your snippet, it's a very different story. I really liked what put there. Very touching piece.
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