Friday, 14 November 2014

Flash Fiction Friday - Out of Time #FFF

Happy Friday, folks. Enjoy today's flash!

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“Honey, I’m sorry. The boss collared me and…”
Aaron burst through the door and his practiced apology died on his tongue. Fuck. She’s in that… His dick sprang into action as all his blood rushed south, obliterating his ability to string a coherent sentence together, and he groaned.
Eva slowly released her hold on the curtains, and looked at him over her shoulder. The disappointment in her gaze hit him in the gut with cock deflating force.
“I didn’t know, can we still try?” he asked, hating her pain.
A lone tear was his answer.

“It was our last chance.”

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Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)

Till next week, folks.
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19 comments:

  1. W00t! First comment! ;) Maybe because it isn't Friday yet and I'm cheating? *giggles innocently*

    okay... oh my god. that was such an emotional flash and matched the picture perfectly.*hugs EVA*

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  2. Great flash as always Doris. That dress is HAWT, if only.

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    1. Thanks, Vida. Isn't it just, re the dress. Hubby said, "I am so getting you one of those.." Hmm, yes, okay then, but my wobbly bits in that? lol ;-)

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  3. Beautiful and so sad. Heart-wrenching. xo

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    1. Yeah, I seem to be writing lots of sad flashes lately.

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  4. How horrible. Sadly, an line must be drawn some time.

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  5. Wow, I'm impressed with this flash. Damn, very good Doris.

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  6. Hot - and I love the word 'collared' slipped in there!

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  7. beautifully written yet heart wrenchingly sad

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  8. Devastatingly fantastic! There are no other words to fit. Love it.

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  9. Oh, my goodness! What a way to slap him with your point - sexy negligee, anyone? Excuses one time too many. Great writing and great flash, Doris :-)

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  10. So full of emotion! I wonder what the rest of the night will entail. I hope things turn around for them. Awesome flash!

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  11. Such a sad flash. Surely they have just one more chance

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