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Friday, 14 November 2014

Flash Fiction Friday - Out of Time #FFF

Happy Friday, folks. Enjoy today's flash!

To see the picture inspiration please click here.

“Honey, I’m sorry. The boss collared me and…”
Aaron burst through the door and his practiced apology died on his tongue. Fuck. She’s in that… His dick sprang into action as all his blood rushed south, obliterating his ability to string a coherent sentence together, and he groaned.
Eva slowly released her hold on the curtains, and looked at him over her shoulder. The disappointment in her gaze hit him in the gut with cock deflating force.
“I didn’t know, can we still try?” he asked, hating her pain.
A lone tear was his answer.

“It was our last chance.”

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Friday Flashers have 100 words to tell a story from the provided picture prompt. Do check out the other flashers. You won't be disappointed. :-)

Till next week, folks.
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19 comments:

  1. Summer Graystone14 November 2014 at 05:49

    W00t! First comment! ;) Maybe because it isn't Friday yet and I'm cheating? *giggles innocently*

    okay... oh my god. that was such an emotional flash and matched the picture perfectly.*hugs EVA*

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  2. VidaB14 November 2014 at 14:18

    Great flash as always Doris. That dress is HAWT, if only.

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    1. Anonymous14 November 2014 at 14:27

      Thanks, Vida. Isn't it just, re the dress. Hubby said, "I am so getting you one of those.." Hmm, yes, okay then, but my wobbly bits in that? lol ;-)

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  3. Muffy Wilson14 November 2014 at 14:56

    Beautiful and so sad. Heart-wrenching. xo

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    1. Anonymous15 November 2014 at 00:52

      Yeah, I seem to be writing lots of sad flashes lately.

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  4. Angelica Dawson14 November 2014 at 15:42

    How horrible. Sadly, an line must be drawn some time.

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    1. Anonymous15 November 2014 at 00:52

      Indeed, it must. Thanks, Angelica :-)

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  5. Anonymous14 November 2014 at 23:07

    Wow, I'm impressed with this flash. Damn, very good Doris.

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  6. Faberge's Thoughts15 November 2014 at 08:07

    Hot - and I love the word 'collared' slipped in there!

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    1. Anonymous16 November 2014 at 23:04

      heh, yeah I couldn't resist ;-)

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  7. Julian Spong16 November 2014 at 18:21

    beautifully written yet heart wrenchingly sad

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  8. Phoenix Johnson USAT Bestseller16 November 2014 at 23:56

    Devastatingly fantastic! There are no other words to fit. Love it.

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  9. Dariel Raye17 November 2014 at 02:27

    Oh, my goodness! What a way to slap him with your point - sexy negligee, anyone? Excuses one time too many. Great writing and great flash, Doris :-)

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  10. Rolling Muse in The Roses17 November 2014 at 05:33

    So full of emotion! I wonder what the rest of the night will entail. I hope things turn around for them. Awesome flash!

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  11. Naomi Shaw19 November 2014 at 12:31

    Such a sad flash. Surely they have just one more chance

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